CARTESIAN LOGIC (update)--
I recieved a B- on the paper. I talked in circles too often when I could have written in straight lines. I needed to follow Descartes own arguments more closely. My prof said I came to very plausible conclusions by not so plausable arguments. He basically liked what I had to say--he said my work was above average--and said I was certain to move up from here.

I could have done better but am still in a really good place for the class.